@@ -5,24 +5,24 @@ Introduction
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Welcome to the Yocto Project Security Manual. This manual provides relevant
-procedures necessary for dealing with security-related tasks supported in the
+procedures for dealing with security-related tasks supported in the
Yocto Project environment. This manual groups related procedures into
higher-level sections. Procedures can consist of high-level steps or low-level
steps depending on the topic.
This manual provides the following:
-- Procedures that help you securing an image with features supported by the
- Yocto Project; for example making a root filesystem read-only.
+- Procedures that help you secure an image using features supported by the
+ Yocto Project; for example, making a root filesystem read-only.
-- Procedures related to processes outside of the target images; for example how
+- Procedures related to processes outside of the target images; for example, how
to deal with vulnerabilities.
This manual does not provide the following:
-- Procedures on security features implemented outside of
+- Procedures for security features implemented outside of
:term:`OpenEmbedded-Core (OE-Core)`.
-- Documentation on the security mechanisms themselves, which can often be found
+- Documentation for the security mechanisms themselves, which can often be found
in the documentation of the feature itself. This manual focuses on how to
- integrate the security mechanism within the Yocto Project.
+ integrate those security mechanisms within the Yocto Project.
Tweaks: - grammar - punctuation - delete word "necessary" as that is too strong a word and implies that what is being discussed is mandatory when it isn't Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca> ---