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Day" To: YP docs mailing list Subject: [PATCH] security-manual: some grammar and wording fixes in intro Message-ID: <6f15263e-56f3-fe32-ea3c-c81d89f34d05@crashcourse.ca> MIME-Version: 1.0 X-AntiAbuse: This header was added to track abuse, please include it with any abuse report X-AntiAbuse: Primary Hostname - cpanel10.indieserve.net X-AntiAbuse: Original Domain - lists.yoctoproject.org X-AntiAbuse: Originator/Caller UID/GID - [47 12] / [47 12] X-AntiAbuse: Sender Address Domain - crashcourse.ca X-Get-Message-Sender-Via: cpanel10.indieserve.net: authenticated_id: rpjday+crashcourse.ca/only user confirmed/virtual account not confirmed X-Authenticated-Sender: cpanel10.indieserve.net: rpjday@crashcourse.ca X-Source: X-Source-Args: X-Source-Dir: List-Id: X-Webhook-Received: from 45-33-107-173.ip.linodeusercontent.com [45.33.107.173] by aws-us-west-2-korg-lkml-1.web.codeaurora.org with HTTPS for ; Sat, 13 Jun 2026 19:24:45 -0000 X-Groupsio-URL: https://lists.yoctoproject.org/g/docs/message/9712 Tweaks: - grammar - punctuation - delete word "necessary" as that is too strong a word and implies that what is being discussed is mandatory when it isn't Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day diff --git a/documentation/security-manual/intro.rst b/documentation/security-manual/intro.rst index 03a8ed1ca..5ea6f5110 100644 --- a/documentation/security-manual/intro.rst +++ b/documentation/security-manual/intro.rst @@ -5,24 +5,24 @@ Introduction ************ Welcome to the Yocto Project Security Manual. This manual provides relevant -procedures necessary for dealing with security-related tasks supported in the +procedures for dealing with security-related tasks supported in the Yocto Project environment. This manual groups related procedures into higher-level sections. Procedures can consist of high-level steps or low-level steps depending on the topic. This manual provides the following: -- Procedures that help you securing an image with features supported by the - Yocto Project; for example making a root filesystem read-only. +- Procedures that help you secure an image using features supported by the + Yocto Project; for example, making a root filesystem read-only. -- Procedures related to processes outside of the target images; for example how +- Procedures related to processes outside of the target images; for example, how to deal with vulnerabilities. This manual does not provide the following: -- Procedures on security features implemented outside of +- Procedures for security features implemented outside of :term:`OpenEmbedded-Core (OE-Core)`. -- Documentation on the security mechanisms themselves, which can often be found +- Documentation for the security mechanisms themselves, which can often be found in the documentation of the feature itself. This manual focuses on how to - integrate the security mechanism within the Yocto Project. + integrate those security mechanisms within the Yocto Project.