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dev-manual: replace "on the contrary" with "by contrast"

Message ID 4214b475-52f5-bbe6-04a7-0dded5906f2f@crashcourse.ca
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Robert P. J. Day June 23, 2025, 3:27 p.m. UTC
The qualifier "By contrast" is more appropriate here, since that
phrase is used to introduce a point that is strikingly different from
what was just discussed, that being the substantial systemd.

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>

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Quentin Schulz June 23, 2025, 3:31 p.m. UTC | #1
Hi Robert,

On 6/23/25 5:27 PM, Robert P. J. Day via lists.yoctoproject.org wrote:
> 
> The qualifier "By contrast" is more appropriate here, since that
> phrase is used to introduce a point that is strikingly different from
> what was just discussed, that being the substantial systemd.
> 

Reviewed-by: Quentin Schulz <quentin.schulz@cherry.de>

Thanks!
Quentin
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diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/init-manager.rst b/documentation/dev-manual/init-manager.rst
index ddce82b81..d0fdfdf77 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/init-manager.rst
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/init-manager.rst
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@  therefore increasing the total system boot time. systemd also substantially
 increases system size because of its multiple components and the extra
 dependencies it pulls.

-On the contrary, BusyBox init is the simplest and the lightest solution and
+By contrast, BusyBox init is the simplest and the lightest solution and
 also comes with BusyBox mdev as device manager, a lighter replacement to
 :wikipedia:`udev <Udev>`, which SysVinit and systemd both use.