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[v2,0/2] Update the devtool quick reference document

Message ID 20241022-devtool-improvements-v2-0-9d2ebf9c5311@bootlin.com
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Antonin Godard Oct. 22, 2024, 8:37 a.m. UTC
* Refresh command outputs from `devtool --help` and `devtool add
  --help`.
* Add some brief details on the subcommands that were previously
  undocumented, and the more recent commands that weren't documented
  yet.
* The remaining subcommands are still present in devtool, so leave them
  as-is.

Signed-off-by: Antonin Godard <antonin.godard@bootlin.com>
---
Changes in v2:
- configure-help: Give an example of what the command will output for.
- ide-sdk: mention that like deploy-target an ssh server must be running
  on the target.
- Link to v1: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20241017-devtool-improvements-v1-0-2bacc656fe39@bootlin.com

---
Antonin Godard (2):
      ref-manual: devtool-reference: refresh example outputs
      ref-manual: devtool-reference: document missing commands

 documentation/ref-manual/devtool-reference.rst | 72 ++++++++++++++++++++++----
 1 file changed, 61 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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base-commit: e4b64514673471850635a8dbbf62f34e710e276a
change-id: 20241017-devtool-improvements-68a7c869e2b4

Best regards,

Comments

Antonin Godard Oct. 28, 2024, 1:54 p.m. UTC | #1
Hi Quentin,

On Tue Oct 22, 2024 at 10:37 AM CEST, Antonin Godard wrote:
> * Refresh command outputs from `devtool --help` and `devtool add
>   --help`.
> * Add some brief details on the subcommands that were previously
>   undocumented, and the more recent commands that weren't documented
>   yet.
> * The remaining subcommands are still present in devtool, so leave them
>   as-is.
>
> Signed-off-by: Antonin Godard <antonin.godard@bootlin.com>
> ---
> Changes in v2:
> - configure-help: Give an example of what the command will output for.
> - ide-sdk: mention that like deploy-target an ssh server must be running
>   on the target.
> - Link to v1: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20241017-devtool-improvements-v1-0-2bacc656fe39@bootlin.com

What do you think of this v2?

I took note of your suggestions and added them here.

Thanks in advance,
Antonin

--
Antonin Godard, Bootlin
Embedded Linux and Kernel engineering
https://bootlin.com
Quentin Schulz Oct. 28, 2024, 2:27 p.m. UTC | #2
Hi Antonin,

On 10/28/24 2:54 PM, Antonin Godard wrote:
> Hi Quentin,
> 
> On Tue Oct 22, 2024 at 10:37 AM CEST, Antonin Godard wrote:
>> * Refresh command outputs from `devtool --help` and `devtool add
>>    --help`.
>> * Add some brief details on the subcommands that were previously
>>    undocumented, and the more recent commands that weren't documented
>>    yet.
>> * The remaining subcommands are still present in devtool, so leave them
>>    as-is.
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Antonin Godard <antonin.godard@bootlin.com>
>> ---
>> Changes in v2:
>> - configure-help: Give an example of what the command will output for.
>> - ide-sdk: mention that like deploy-target an ssh server must be running
>>    on the target.
>> - Link to v1: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20241017-devtool-improvements-v1-0-2bacc656fe39@bootlin.com
> 
> What do you think of this v2?
> 

Looking good. I'm a bit wary of giving my Reviewed-by on things I've 
never used though.

This looks like valid Sphinx and English to me, so that's how far I can 
go for this review :)

Cheers,
Quentin
Antonin Godard Oct. 30, 2024, 10:13 a.m. UTC | #3
Hi Quentin,

On Mon Oct 28, 2024 at 3:27 PM CET, Quentin Schulz wrote:
> Hi Antonin,
>
> On 10/28/24 2:54 PM, Antonin Godard wrote:
>> Hi Quentin,
>>
>> On Tue Oct 22, 2024 at 10:37 AM CEST, Antonin Godard wrote:
>>> * Refresh command outputs from `devtool --help` and `devtool add
>>>    --help`.
>>> * Add some brief details on the subcommands that were previously
>>>    undocumented, and the more recent commands that weren't documented
>>>    yet.
>>> * The remaining subcommands are still present in devtool, so leave them
>>>    as-is.
>>>
>>> Signed-off-by: Antonin Godard <antonin.godard@bootlin.com>
>>> ---
>>> Changes in v2:
>>> - configure-help: Give an example of what the command will output for.
>>> - ide-sdk: mention that like deploy-target an ssh server must be running
>>>    on the target.
>>> - Link to v1: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20241017-devtool-improvements-v1-0-2bacc656fe39@bootlin.com
>>
>> What do you think of this v2?
>>
>
> Looking good. I'm a bit wary of giving my Reviewed-by on things I've
> never used though.
>
> This looks like valid Sphinx and English to me, so that's how far I can
> go for this review :)
>
> Cheers,
> Quentin

Thanks for the review!
And I'll add the `ref-classes-autotools` suggestion from the other mail.

Cheers,
Antonin

--
Antonin Godard, Bootlin
Embedded Linux and Kernel engineering
https://bootlin.com